River Street Neighborhood:
This map is telling the reader of the history and transformation of the River Street Neighborhood in Boise, ID from as early as 1891 all the way to today. With the use of contemporary Google Earth pictures and geo-referenced historic pictures and maps at different time periods, the reader is immersed is the change and continuity of the neighborhood and it’s notable businesses.
It seems to me that the argument the map is making that the neighborhood has grown from its historic roots by emphasizing the landmarks and districts within the neighborhood that made it the part of the town to be in during its hay-day. The Google Earth Tour mentions grocery stores, family houses, and more that can all be pointed to as references on the map and serve to tell the narrative of the neighborhood. In addition, the author highlights a section of the neighborhood as having received multiple historical preservation grants in the past so that the generations to come can enjoy the same history that is being told today. I especially enjoyed seeing the geo-referenced maps that they included in the tour. It gave an interesting perspective to capture the change of the land over time, specifically how half of the neighborhood is reclaimed land after the dam was built.
Though it had a fair number of pictures and stories on the tour, a silence I noticed was specific family stories or stories about people who worked to change the community and weave the historic tale it tells today.
Lastly, I do believe there are a couple things that could be changed to make this tour more effective. In specific, I would have liked to see the street-view of the current zoomed in on more and then see a picture of a historic building on that site to give a better idea of the change the neighborhood has encountered.
The History of Beer Brewing in Syracuse:
The story that the reader is being told is a fairly comprehensive outline of the beer breweries and production models of the 10 major brewing companies in Syracuse from the 1830’s through Prohibition. One of the main arguments I took away from this storymap was that the author believes that the companies in Syracuse were pioneers in the American beer journey. I believe this is most firmly supported in the beginning of the
I believe this is most firmly supported in the beginning of the storymap as the author depicts, through graphs, that New York accounted for nearly 80% of America’s hop production in some of the last years of the 19th century. With the exception of one of the ten breweries, the author creates a photo with a background that is a modern picture of the original site of the brewery, then overlays a picture of the original brewery on the background, allowing someone who is viewing the storymap today to venture to the scene and glean a better idea of what the brewery may have looked like in its hay-day.
Some of the notable silences of this storymap include that it doesn’t refer much, outside of the introduction, to the full production line and the full economic effect these breweries may have had in the region, and instead just focuses on some of the technological innovations each of them provided to the beer industry.
Overall, I would say that the storymap is very effective in its overall goal and achieved its argument. I loved the maps in the beginning of the storymap that showed how many of these breweries were located on the rivers to give the reader a good understanding of where to locate the past breweries. Another map/graph I might add to this would be how wide the reach of each of these breweries was. Did they sell just in-state? Regionally? Nationwide? Giving a scope would be a very visually appealing graphic, I believe.
The Voyage of the HMS Beagle:
This story and accompanying map tell the story of Darwin’s first circumnavigation, the second trip of the HMS Beagle, and the first with Captain FitzRoy at the helm. Specifically, it details their roughly 20 stops along the way, what either Darwin, FitzRoy or the crew noted about each of the locales and any other interesting bit of information or history that was encountered along the way.
In my view, I believe this storymap is making the argument that Darwin, known for some radical thinking in his later years, possessed a soul that was innately curious, grounded in discoveries, and limited only by his imagination and anxiousness to jump to conclusions. Many times during the story, Darwin’s journal is referenced as a way for the reader to understand what he saw and then hear of how he inferenced his conclusions from his findings. In addition, there are paintings, pictures, or artistic recreations of the places and findings that Darwin encountered throughout this voyage to give the reader an ability to better step into the shoes of the explorers.
Perhaps one of the more notable silences I honed in on while reading this storymap is that there are not a lot of first-hand stories from the natives the Beagle encountered, just what the crew saw and what they thought about it. I think finding some more stories about these interactions may add an interesting element to this piece.
I absolutely think the storymap is effective as is. I really enjoyed seeing pictures, paintings and representations of the places the Beagle visited. In addition, I really liked the historical context surrounding each landing. Darwin is a very famous historical figure, and weaving in some of the reactions to his findings and writings throughout the voyage seemed to tie the bow on this piece very well.
All things considered, I believe the story map of the HMS Beagle is the most effective map. I think the HMS Beagle map did the best job of trying to weave a comprehensive historical narrative throughout the time that it covered. It was able to do this so effectively, I believe, because it focused on a very narrow timeline. A feature I enjoyed about it right off the bat was that the reader can easily follow along with where any individual port fits into the whole of the trip: there is a clear beginning and clear end. Figuring out a way to do accomplish this on the other maps may prove useful. Also, whereas the brewery tour of Syracuse and River Street neighborhood both focused on many decades of history and sources, the HMS Beagle trip lasted for only 5 years. Being able to narrow this focus so well allowed the author to write in greater depth about any given stop the ship made and add in flavorful context and primary sources to give the reader a detailed understanding of the time. In addition, although each story map had silences that, if addressed, would greatly increase the effectiveness of each, the HMS Beagle map had the least destructive silence in that it would only add context instead of content.